Reviews for Cliché
ThePhoenixDaughter chapter 14 . 1/24/2013
so this part didn't really happen?

in all, its a great story. I read the whole thing and I enjoyed it very much
ThePhoenixDaughter chapter 13 . 1/24/2013
you put "expect" when I think you meant "except"
it's all very touching. you still haven't seen him again?
ThePhoenixDaughter chapter 9 . 1/24/2013
"decided to began"? uh, no. it's either just "began" or "decided to".
"But somehow, the perfect reply had managed to be thought of the night before." that is a very awkward sentence...
ThePhoenixDaughter chapter 8 . 1/24/2013
it's kind of hard to tell who's speaking. you're supposed to put everything one person says in the same paragraph and start a new one for reactions of a different person
Fp014 chapter 14 . 9/16/2012
Hey oaky ! It's forever phantom ! I really loved the story. And I'm glad things worked out !
Knightrunner chapter 14 . 7/25/2012
Aww, most of the story I already knew but the last chapter, being AU I couldn't have known. That was adorable. Tho the part where melody hugged Ryan just felt like some punching me in the gut. I don't think I need to say why.
vampirefrootloop chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I have a very bad feeling about this...
Well, on to the good review part!
I saw one typo during the first flashback, but its a simple letter change
I like your imagery and yo ominous feeling. Defiitly good writing right here
so, onward i go!
Knightrunner chapter 8 . 7/12/2012
I'm homeschooled so I ain't gotta worry bout that.
Knightrunner chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
*sigh* so I can't help but roll my eyes at the fact that melody was so happy that she was in contact with Ryan for ten minutes but then I think back to cohutta, I did the same thing with John and just a few days ago at the meeting, sitting sooooo close to um, you know his name so I ain't gonna say it, its impossible not to touch him and ya. He makes me act like such a girlygirl!
dragonian master chapter 14 . 7/11/2012
thats a shawarma wrap! *ish hungrey*
soon we shall see more! but poor little FF is all alone with no updates, no new stories*coughneedfluffyoneshot*.
and now lets party! *fictory dance* oo lokie ryan is still in a bathrobe! *ish killed*
Guest chapter 14 . 7/11/2012
Aww, a bittersweet ending. My fav line: One crush, one heartbreak, and two hearts intertwined. Beautiful!

Congrats on a good story and for a successful one, too! I enjoyed it! truephan
JJsMommy29 chapter 14 . 7/11/2012
you did an amazing job on this story
lenluv139 chapter 14 . 7/11/2012
Wow! This story is so breathtaking; love how I can actually feel every thing the charecters are feeling.
Gabby726 chapter 14 . 7/11/2012
I thought it was an amazing ending! Itz the end... Ohmigosh *sniff sniff* I cant believe it! I would really appreciate it if u gave us more flashbacks! I'm pretty sure I've already told u this but here it is again ur an absolutely amazing writer! Can't wait til u write more! :D
Meipuru chapter 14 . 7/11/2012
Yeah! Nice ending!
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