Reviews for Call Boy
liljezebel chapter 15 . 6/25/2013
Hello! I have recently discovered this story and am really enjoying it. I love the developing romance between Dexter and Kyler. Poor Dexter is so broken and sad and hurting. While Kyler is so patient and gentle and kind, but he has this desperation about him that makes my heart ache for him also. I wish that Dexter would get the help that he needs so that he can move on with his life and accept the love that Kyler is offering him. I think they would both benefit from it.

I love your writing style. I like how it goes from one short scene to another like a movie. I don't think that it is necessary to spend a lot of time on explaining every minute of a character's day and every thought that goes through their mind to get a complete story. Not everyone can pull it off but you do it brilliantly.

This chapter was a little confusing for me because I didn't understand why Kyler wouldn't be happy that Dexter quit being an escort, but then I realized that he probably doesn't know that. He just thinks Dexter ended their contract and now he is going to leave. I am not sure what Ali is trying to pull here, but it seems as if she is trying to mislead Kyler on purpose. I don't like her, but I don't think I am alone on that. Loved the nod to Pretty Woman, by the way.

Keep up the good work and I will be looking forward to your next update.
jaskolka chapter 15 . 6/22/2013
This chapter was great!
I am so excited to see what happens next that I check fictionpress a few times a day just to see if there is an update from you.
I feel a lot of drama coming on and can't wait to see how you are going to handle that. If Kyler just goes ahead and screws somebody first without confronting Dexter the poor guy will just bounce back straight to the darkest place.
Especially since it was mentioned that he is terrified of rejection.
This plot twist is sooooo to my liking.
Damien-Rose chapter 15 . 6/15/2013
omg the last paragraph...just omg ...omg omg omg ... haha I freaking loved this chapter 3
animeskullgirl16 chapter 15 . 6/11/2013
Aww... I feel like shit is about to go down. Holy crap... poor Kyler, and poor Dexter is probably going to freak out next chapter... Anyway, I liked it :3 But Ali is still a bitch...
Aletiah chapter 15 . 6/10/2013
I really, really don't like Ali, and right now I'm a little mad at Kyler. He should have answered that phone, and I really hope he won't look through the profiles. I hope he realizes this means Dexter is free now and what they can have (if they dare) is something much more honest and true.
I hope for a happy ending :) So I think that they maybe will get together, as soon as one of them dare to speak up and tell what he wants. Update soon!
Morgan Stepanov chapter 15 . 6/9/2013
This is a pretty great story so far! A little high on the angst for me, but it's well written, and the characters have good personality and are very real and believable if a bit difficult to relate to.

Looking forward to an update!

- Kerrigas
S.H. Marr chapter 15 . 6/9/2013

I think I'd be okay if he just wanted some time to think first, but noooooo. Stupid Kyler. Not sure if this is actually realistic of if I just think it is because it shows up in so many stories. It still comes across that way, though, so it works.

Also, if it took someone like Ali to make him question an admittedly foolish decision, well. He really is a fool.

I...I don't feel like I have been much helpful. Kind of annoyed with Kyler atm, in case you couldn't tell.
bonky jo chapter 14 . 5/25/2013
Wow I read this in one sitting (need to go to bed now) and it really just impacted me(guess that's the right word?).. For some reason the summary made me think this would be a MxM version of pretty woman. And yet so many majorissues are adressed here, varying from the night life, sexually transmitted diseases, abuse, rapes, and drugs. i feel like you covered all the bases in a well-written storyline.

On another note, when I first started reading, I seriously wasn't expecting dexter to be a rape victim. Or to be so traumatized! i initially just thought his character would be a stuck up escort, and the post-rape dexter is far from that. After reading this its like you really get a glimpse into their world. Everything is so vivid and falls into place so that we can understand his character better.

And I love the POV switches. I find Kyler's interludes to be soo interesting. I can't wait for Kyler's reaction to dex's resignation. I think shock will be an understatement. But then again he probably has some idea of how dex feels for him. But I bet right now he doesn't know if its real or just the job... Anyways I can't wait for the next update! I'm on pin and needles ;-)
R. Ficst chapter 10 . 5/23/2013
hmm, I like the structure of this story, but somehow I'm short of the feelings of falling in love. Maybe it's because Dexter isn't there yet.
Reena chapter 14 . 5/16/2013
I really really like your story.I wanted to point out a lot of the scenes I really liked but I think there are so many that I can jus say I love ur whole story:))I really wish for a happy ending.
ramblingrobin chapter 14 . 5/15/2013
I really like this story. I want to see Dexter get better and have sexytime with Kyler!
allhallowstheless chapter 14 . 5/12/2013
I actually love this story. It's not what I was expecting when I opened it, but I love it more than I thought I would. Thank you so much.
Aletiah chapter 14 . 5/12/2013
Happy for this update, I have missed Kyler and Dexter :)
And I'm glad to hear that Ali wasn't that awful I thought her to be... but Dexter is right, it still happened, and it was partly her fault. Maybe she didn't know, but she could have warned him.
I also think it was good that Dexter left his job. He and Kyler are so sweet together! Update soon :)
And yeah, a sequel would be nice too :)
animeskullgirl16 chapter 14 . 5/12/2013
Hm... I do think that a sequel would be cool, but what would it entail? Also, I think that Kyler will take the news happily because he'll think Dexter is staying with him. :D this was cute! A nice side to Grace and Trevor and Jason that you usually never see. I really enjoyed it! Please update soon!
animeskullgirl16 chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
Not Trevor! When she said Trevor in the club I thought he was dead and then I realized it's because he's not a stripper, but he can't be dead!
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