Reviews for And The Sky Fills With Ash
Lynn K. Hollander chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
So what/where is Vervusius? I found Vesuvius, Virgina and Mt. Vesuvius, near Naples, but no Versusius.
Roka Polaris chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Nice piece of writing. I liked the way you play with language rhythm, especially in the first half of the text. I found it easy to relate to the narrator and the situation reading this, could see the volcano-eruption right in front of my eyes!
wolves are awesome chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Nice, but if I have to critisize then I think you shoulde have made a prpper story out of it