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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good thing you have! You should continue this. :3 it would be cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, that's a creepy twist at the end. it really shows how humans can be monsters sometimes and really reflects on the state of humanity (or a possibility of what it would become in the future). it reminds me of another short story i've read: it's called "the sentry". i won't give anything away though, that'll ruin the entire thing :) |
![]() ![]() Oh wow, this is ... wow. I'm baffeled and speechless - okay, not so much as speechless but ... damn! This would be pretty crazy if this were to ever happen. I'm not sure if it's a possibility though, but it does sound cool. Even though there'll be a lot of blood and gore and whatnot. Lol ;)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short and sweet. I liked the sentence, "The trees were thin, black needles reaching up into an unforgiving charcoal-grey sky." However, I felt that end of the sentence was loaded with words. I think if you omitted the word,"grey" it would have more impact. You have a way with pacing, which is something I find very difficult. And I thought the last sentence was very powerful. Great story! |