Reviews for When
Delilah Brightman chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
I love this poem. Me being me, sometimes I prefer the dark side, so that edge was appreciated. This poem does make you think: what is really important in life? Based off this poem, I am looking forward to reading more of your works. You have real talent!
Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
ah yes, but how i do love the darkness, as writers i think it's important for us to embrace all of our sides so we can fully express every feeling. Yours was haunting and a bit creepy with the mental images, but i liked it and thought it was good! Loved the line "When my quill no longer flies decorating virgin sheets with words" VERY NICE!