Reviews for Thunder Mountain
The Moon Howls At The Wolf chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
This is a great piece! I love the way the words roll out sortof like the preogression of the storm. The last line is powerful, although I would remove the comma between "a solace" and "that will not come" to allow for better flow.
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Amazing as ever! I loved the imagery the line 'lucifer's lance' was super! loved it :-)
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
I really like this one, gives a very epic feel. Very much like older metal music. Though that might just be me listening to too much Venom lately. Still, very epic. It's like every word was chosen specifically to sound thunderous, like the kind of thing some great mighty warrior ought to be bellowing.
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
"Satan's own sword and/Lucifer's lance"
were my favourie lines. the alliteration was very powerful