Reviews for To you
S.H. Marr chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
This was formatted really weirdly. I'm not sure what's up with your paragraph and line breaks, but you might want to look at them. This is practically formatted as a poem or something.
JustAnotherNewbie chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Ouch. Scary and sad. I'm worried this may trigger someone to self harm so please put un a warning at the beginning.