This is a really good poem! It flows really well and the rhyme scheme's good! I really like it :)

Wow, I can tell. Dealing with the same thing, what can we do? But this is kinda how I feel. Thx for putting it in words :)

"Don't speak what's in that little mind.
Do not seek, so you won't find."

"But it is truly wrong what you have done.
Sentenced me to darkness and took away my sun."

"My freedom is stripped.
My spirit ripped."

Amazing job with these line. Major applause. Though, I have two suggestion for this poem. Yet, nevertheless, fantastic job. Truly amazing. Keep it up :D

I understand kind of, just cuz i have friends who kind of share your situation. just a piece of friendly advice I find that to change the tone and voice of the author, rhyming 100% of the time isn't always the best thing. ive learned that in order to get a point across, breaking the rhyme to emphasize a different word or thought is in my opinion more effective. If you read other people's poems then sometimes you can gather more of a sense of which ones sound plausible and not as... what's the word... repetitive? and what you can do is if you find one that sounds good in your mind and you personally enjoyed reading it, investigate why that poem sounds better from maybe another less interesting/grabbing poem

Really sad but you conveyed it really well! You just forgot to capitalize some i's, part from that grammars fine :)

This was very good. Very well written. I enjoyed reading it.

-Olivia-