Reviews for Pretend
skersey chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
This is a really interesting piece. I like how I could envision someone performing this in my head, because it has feeling and a conversational aspect, as well as a poetic presence. I do however believe that writing is the ultimate answer to getting into people's heads, but you certainly do have a formidable argument. To do anything, the first thing you need to have is a human connection.

Fave line: "You've gotta pull the heartstrings and the hand strings and the arm strings."