Reviews for The Army is not for me
EPuppy chapter 50 . 8/28/2013
It wasnt too bad for ur first story keep writtin cuz u hve potential :)
EPuppy chapter 29 . 8/27/2013
Dramaaaaa! :3
EPuppy chapter 24 . 8/27/2013
OMG!
EPuppy chapter 19 . 8/27/2013
Not trying to ne disrespectful or somethin but nao im fellin like Lan and Bo are becoming the same characters
EPuppy chapter 12 . 8/27/2013
I love thiese guyzzz :3
EPuppy chapter 8 . 8/27/2013
I love how i feel the difference between Lan and B :)
EPuppy chapter 5 . 8/27/2013
Since the start of this story im lovinggggg itt its sooo cool i really love it :) youre a good writter keep it :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Sorry but it should be Colonel not Coronel. Otherwise so far so good.
smashthat chapter 50 . 6/5/2013
Aside frm the grammer mistakes this story was awsome. It would be nice to know his dad and brother got what they deserved,a padded cell for both the damn looney toons. Great work though.
Zach chapter 50 . 1/3/2013
Sorry i didnt review for the other chapters but i have school in the morning, and it is currently 1:00 AM.
First off, AMAZING. It was beautiful and mushy hot when it needed to be. Some things you do need to work on. Grammar and punctuation are the main thing i had any issue with. I would sometimes get confused as to where the emphasis of the sentence was. Another small thing that im not really worried about is when any one talks its usually "he said, she said i said I asked he asked she asked" there wasnt much variety. Again i dont really worry about it but hey some people will. Thank you for writing this it was everything someone looks for when they read romance. Action, passion, mushy gushy fluffiness. it was just so awesome. I am seriously hoping for a sequel. file/ view/ that link replacing all the "dot"s with periods will give you a site with a hundred ways to say "said" if you want to look into it. again amazing simply marvelous
WAHHH chapter 50 . 9/12/2012
Don't throw the Chris/Dillon boom at us at the end... how do we handle it?
chocolatebazzar chapter 10 . 9/10/2012
Chapter 10 and 11 are missing. They are just repeats of chapter 9.
Guest chapter 10 . 9/6/2012
Chapter 10 and 11 are reposts of chapter 9 and it then skips to chapter 12...
Guest chapter 12 . 7/15/2012
I thought you should know that chapters 10 and 11 are just chapter 9 repeated. And I'm guessing that the actual content is totally missing, since several days were skipped. Must be some sort of glitch. Anyways, just thought you should know.
caw122182 chapter 46 . 7/12/2012
This was a pretty good story. I found a few grammatical errors throughout, but otherwise very well done.
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