Reviews for Suffocating
PureHeartsWait chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
This is straightforward and powerful, I like it. It's a simple three lines, yet it really makes you think. Why can't this person breathe? What's wrong with them? Stuff like that, so yeah, great job!
Ygg chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Very straightforward, which enhances its powerful emotions. Well done!
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Iambic meter is perfect in this poem! Great first haiku!

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Saki Kikkio Ohayashi chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Catchy
filledwithsilence chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
lovely. :)
CrazyLittleGermanMiss chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
short sweet and to he point.
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
I like well written haiku's because they are so powerful in just a few lines.
Loved it.
catching.my.breath chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Pretty nice!
Aizawa Minami chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Very good haiku, not bad for a first Japanese poem, keep up the good work!
Spring Storm chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Simple but powerful. Good job!
Rusty136 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
this is good keep going
lymli chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
wow, it's meaningful
a-creative-name chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Wow. So simple and yet it still leaves such an impact... great job!:)
DappledKarma chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Very simple and effective. It gets me thinking. :D
Singing A Silent Song chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
This is good. It manages to convey the meaning without going on and on. Good one!