Reviews for The Marionette Dance
Iris Azure chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Fitting indeed. That one person always seems to be better in every sense, but upon closer examination flaws are revealed, weaknesses percieved and hopefully that can help you humanize, if not get over that person.
BriFach chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Wow, it was great. Does sound like it's about He Who Must Not Be Named though!
annacannard chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Awwe, it starts so sad, but ends cool. Great work