Reviews for Gloomy
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
So sad. The 'sun behind dark clouds' was a hopeful image though. And I like how you started with speech. Nicely done!
FranGipani6181 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Naww so sad :( but you have used some beautiful imagery in this :) Nice!

Fran
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
What a sad poem, yet it was very well done. Amazing job with this, keep it up :D