Reviews for The Quest for Vision
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Ha! That was unexpected and wonderful. I actually had to read it twice - because, honestly, the first time, the language seemed so vague and abstract that I kept thinking, "Hm... There's not much substance here, is there?" And then that ending line... And suddenly, this wasn't the poem I thought it was. Every detail and phrase suddenly ripples with irony. Very, very deft, my friend.

Cesalie
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I liked the starting
There are some men of bravest souls

Who seek what's hard to find.
sometimes people find something different from their ideal, XD