|Reviews for Notes On A Young Tyrant|
| Bushwah chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
Since the passing of the last dictator, Aemilius had kept the social-political ties with what was left of the Egyptian kingdom, and it was through these ties that we garnished the resources we needed to procure in order to make our return to Rome.
Garnished should be garnered.
Also, there was something about a "smart sword" or "smart blade" - aren't phones enough? Apparently Rome had different priorities than America...
| Bushwah chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
You speak Truth.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Wonderful writing style with just the right amount of detail so I feel like I was there witnessing and learning all about this character. Loved it. Great, beautiful job!