Reviews for Challenging Faith
rosieroo chapter 6 . 6/16/2013
Filling chapter? Whateverrr I really enjoyed this! And that is a perfect amount of dialogue so I don't know what you're going on about! AND AWWWW THANKS FOR THE DEDICATION I love you! And your writing, of course ;) I really like how you've put some pretty big issues in here and how both sides of their arguments make sense. Loved it!
kitelina chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Yayy! I'm excited for this story!
Been in the process to write a religion related work set in college but didn't have any modern day examples that weren't memoirs or theology essays haha
Looking forward to what happens to Asher :)
Peachy-09 chapter 4 . 11/23/2012
I like the relationship that's already forming between the two boys even if it is confusing. I think seeing them both in school is going to be fantastic! Next chapter soon!
rosieroo chapter 4 . 11/22/2012
HELEN HOW COULD YOU HAVE THIS AND NOT POST IT?! Gawwwwwd. Still loving it and can't wait to see more of Rusty and Asher
Sara chapter 4 . 11/21/2012
NaNoWriMo can make everyone forgetful! Ha!

This was a great little update. I can't wait to see how the two boys interact at school.
fellintothemoon chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
I just rereead this. I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER, DAMMIT . okay I'm calm now. But legit. I want some RustyxAsher action.
Peachy-09 chapter 3 . 8/10/2012
The conversation between the two boys was perfect. I do hope that we see them as friends, as well as much more! Nicely written.
rosieroo chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
When uni was finally over I raced back home to read this lovely little chapter and, as per usual, I loved it! I can't wait to see more of Rusty and inside the school. I thought all the conversation here flowed really well, especially with all the description. It was perfect and I don't think I saw any mistakes!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
This is an extremely sweet banner, I love it. When do we expect an update?
CreativeChick233 chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Also, can I ask what ADoR is? (Btw, great beginning!)
CreativeChick233 chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
Oh wow! I'm definitely intrigued. I wonder why this story doesn't have more reviews? It's definitely off to a great start. I look forward to hearing more..
ThePointGirl chapter 2 . 7/14/2012
O.o

I'm liking this, it is intriguing and has a very believable voice/tone.

Not going to lie, I generally stay away from fictions which include religion like this as I've never experienced that life... at all.

However, I am really enjoying this so far as it's probably one of the best written fictions with this kind of theme.

Bravo.
Write more.
xxx
Peachy-09 chapter 2 . 7/14/2012
I like the concept of Father Louis giving Asher a distraction to test his strength; which then turns out to be the boy he kissed in the first place - if that's where you're going with this but I bet it is ;) Fantastic twist, I can't wait for chapter two.
rosieroo chapter 2 . 7/14/2012
Helen, you have some seriously good writing skills! Im interested to find out what hope is hiding and ashers family dynamics, with shiloh and all. I looooove the name asher and i love the fact that you can shorten both their names to ash and rust. Lol. I thought the prologue was set after the main story but im glad he's already 'sinned' with rusty. It make it all so much more interesting!
fellintothemoon chapter 2 . 7/13/2012
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I love this story. Helen, you never fail to amaze me with your writing skillz. I kinda wanna hate Hope, but I like how supportive she is of Asher. AND WOAH. At first I was like "The new kid is totally that guy. But as the Tory went on I doubted it. AND THEN Rusty actually I'd turn out to be the guy. I predict awesome things from this story. Love you.

Melissa
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