Reviews for Stuck In The Past
sdfgfhgfjhj chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
That was really good!
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
This is a thought provoking piece. Wanting to do as you please, the past stops you from going a step further. It reminds me that the past will always try to keep us from doing things we want to do. This piece does a marvelous job at emphasizing that point. Very well written, and I loved your choice of words. :)

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Very relatable. I love the imagery of sprawling out a name and defaced desks. The opening sentence of this poem was also a strong way to start.
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Hmmm... it's another one of those ones that I can't fully explain about. That's terrible English, I know, but it's quarter past 1 in the morning and Jeremy Kyle is on (listening to trash/unfortunates solve the problems of their lives). Anyway, I'm beating about the bush. Loving the imagery, as always, and beautiful word choice :)