|Reviews for Devoid of Hope|
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 2/27
This poem reminds me so much of the riddles from Redwall series by Brian Jacques. The stanzas glide into each other and have a quick pace that is natural. Your word choice adds to the quick pace and contractions too. The words give sense of swift short hopping. I do not think this is a weird poem at all. It is genuine and loving in fact!
| sassyk100 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
awh, this was so sweet. it really shows how much the writer cares, the way you said 'you' instead of 'her' or 'him' makes it feel personal, you know? almost like you're talking to me. it's enough to give me chills !