Reviews for The Dominating Force
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Charming. Especially the last two lines. Keep it up :D
SCB96 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Isn't this the story of every teenagers life. Very nice job! You captured the feelings of most teenagers (at least what I feel) in only a few stanzas. Again amazing job!