Reviews for The Dominating Force |
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Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/16/2012 Charming. Especially the last two lines. Keep it up :D |
SCB96 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012 Isn't this the story of every teenagers life. Very nice job! You captured the feelings of most teenagers (at least what I feel) in only a few stanzas. Again amazing job! |