Reviews for Don't Leave Now, maybe
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
"But I couldn't see their way, only feel mine."... I loved that line. It was such a great way to describe how it is sometimes when people try to get you to change your emotions.

The piece was really interesting. It kept me reading to find out more, but I was a bit disappointed. I kinda wanted more. Who was the doctor and why were they there? If I'm understanding right that it was suicide then why didn't they take you to a psych hospital? They could do more. Unless, I'm missing the point somehow. I dunno it was just kind of confusing though.

I did like the moment between the brothers though. You described it well and it seemed heartfelt.

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