Reviews for Caught in a Storm
The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I like the structure of the first half of the poem because it gives a bit of a steps effect, slowly building up a powerful image with a firm list of elements.

I don't like the use of commas here because it imposes the same sort of pause all throughout the poem and there are some parts that speak out for a greater/more powerful/lesser/more subtle pause. Having all those commas winds up being the same as not punctuating it at all.
Rogue Energizer Bunny chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Oooh, I like this!

We were in a massive storm a while ago. It was crazy.
walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Oh, nice! That sounded fun lol, nice work, keep it up