Reviews for What She Saw
Montara chapter 22 . 10/3/2015
Michael wants to protect her and that's why he stayed!
Montara chapter 21 . 10/3/2015
Both hurt her and she's saving them all by sacrificing herself :
Montara chapter 20 . 10/3/2015
Can't wait to find out about Jez's past and who she reallt is. As well as Will's love!
Montara chapter 19 . 10/3/2015
A vulnerable Will...but didn't last long.
Montara chapter 18 . 10/3/2015
She's a fairy!
Montara chapter 17 . 10/3/2015
Poor Jez :(
Montara chapter 16 . 10/3/2015
What's going on?!
Montara chapter 15 . 10/3/2015
I don't think is really Michael...but if Non-Michael can help her...
Montara chapter 14 . 10/3/2015
NO! He can't be dead! He's just a prisoner and they'll free him! :(((
Montara chapter 13 . 10/3/2015
These fae are so dangerous! Poor humans have no chance against them! First she almost drowned and now cut her throat!
Montara chapter 12 . 10/3/2015
The way these fae can take do whatever they want with humans is frightening! And yet, can't stop admire their powers.

And Jez is powerless and has to do whatever they want...hope she'll discover some powers of her own or make good alliances to protect herself.
Montara chapter 11 . 10/2/2015
She'll go on a mission that might kill her and in return she'll receive nothing? I think she was played by everyone...they can't return in their land without the weapon and the key activates only by her touch...she holds a lot of power, she should have bargained.

Will tried to kill her! And he's so..cold! Maybe she'll be able to turn that heart from stone into something that could feel, that would be very nice!

What's with Aidyn, is he able to smell the fae? And him advising against Michael...hope he's not right :
Montara chapter 10 . 10/2/2015
They kissed :))

Will helped in his own nasty way. And now they met Queen Mab! This is so interesting! :D
Montara chapter 9 . 10/2/2015
I love the universe you're creating here even though it's kind of scary. I think Michael was right to stop her, she doesn't know what the nymph will ask and could be something dangerous for her or someone she loves.

Frankly, I think Michael is great for her, but only as he's now, hope he'll remain the good guy in your story and doesn't act like this to trick her.
Montara chapter 8 . 10/2/2015
I can't believe those guys aren't arrested by now! Hope she'll press charges! I mean, it's alright that Michael defended her, but they walked out without punishment! They could do it to other girls, too! Where is the guy from the Witness Protection? She should talk with him!

Michael is a fairy :) And he's good! So glad that he's protecting her. Bet she still has tons of things to discover about him!
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