Reviews for Into the Void or The Matrix
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Amazing, loved it :-D I really liked the "Don't watch for me, Don't wait for me. Don't look back. Don't look backā€¦" It created a great effect and added to the overall imagery. Great job :-D
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Another awesome poem, that flows between very literal descriptions, and symbolic, cryptic imagery. Captures a strong sense of abandonment, with minimal hints as to the specific incident, while giving as detailed a picture as possible. Great job!
a nameless emotion chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Wonderful, Everything From The Title To The Last Line In Particular I Love. x
The Moon Howls At The Wolf chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Wow... intense immgery and emotion. I love the contrast between what I percieve as science fiction illusions and human nature, very telling. Great job playing with emjambment, although I don't necessarily feel the need to bold the line, "in your glorified wake." Once again, strong ending line!
Keep Writing!