|Reviews for Why The World Needs Color|
| DefineBeauty chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Some concrit coming your way!
First off, I love the idea of this piece. Color is such a beautiful thing and as you point out, such a big part of our lives! But it would make the poem even better if you expanded on it some, add some more comparisons, more color, show some more of the world! It's too short in my opinion.
Also, you have a couple misspelled words, quit should be quite, etc.
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Simply and nice. Also true. Keep it up :D