Reviews for Bitter Rivalry
Irishcass chapter 2 . 5/10/2013
Please continue on Wattpad
Guest chapter 2 . 7/7/2012
i came acroos a sentence that should be phrased like"those simple five words were enough"
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
um not to be mean but you have a double word infraction in paragraph 5 but i really enjoyed this chapter
Charles O'Carry chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Cliche but very interesting, I'm very eager to know what happens in the next chapter. But who are you dedicating this story 2? A name please? :)