Love!
Keep on Writing!

I LOVED it! THAT'S a love story! Love that transcends language barriers! I'm sorry, I am fangirling. You see I am a romantic girl who loves other languages and cultures besides my own. So I fully believe that you can fall in love while not even speaking the same language as the other person. I wish this story was longer, like 50 chapters longer. Ah and thanks for the translations at the bottom, I was afraid I would have to use a google translator to figure out what Esmeralda was saying haha. Anywho, I've rambled enough. Thank you. It has been an honor to read that.

wow, it's great that there are such dedicated reviewers like 'Guest'! haha, and dedicated writers like you who actually go back and change the work. great job.
I LOVE NIGEL! what an amazing british bat! haha, this had me in splits throughout for nigel and his awesomeness(:
write more soon!

It was good! I liked it! but I would like to give you some corrections about the Spanish translations, I'm from Argentina so it is my first language, please know it's for the improvement on this one-shot and I really appreciate the effort of learning a language as complicated as Spanish and using it in a story.

Corrections for the translations
In order of appearance.
title: "Casaté conmigo querida?" – marry me darling?
"Espero que él haya sido agradable, senorita."
"Ah... salvó mi vida."
"Estoy eternamente en deuda con él"
"Voy a limpiarlo.."
"él está enamorado de usted."
¡eso es imposible!
Este hombre será mi muerte

PS: I'm not posting this as "anonymous" because I'm scared of your reaction I wanted to send you a Pm, really, but I'm new to Fictionpress and hadn't made and account yet. Sorry for my grammar and spelling mistakes!

Haha, this was epic. so cute. Can't wait for the next cliche(: How many d'you have left?

Beautiful story. I think I love how Lucian is a gruff, tough business man and is undone by a beautiful woman, with a beautiful heart that needs no translation. It's a great story, and I'm happy that you did this particular cliche. (: