Reviews for Birds
MikSD chapter 26 . 10/21/2012
I got really into this story and I thought it was very well written. Even though there were some parts that were rather slow, I thought that most of the story was very entertaining
Searchingformyheart chapter 26 . 10/20/2012
Gaahhhh I was so mad when this chapter ended :P great update! At first I was scared Tim was like turning them in or something...and then I was like HAHA I WAS RIGHT I KNEW FELT WAS MAGICAL
Shadowedzone chapter 26 . 10/20/2012
Love the new chapter. It wasn't what I was expecting (that's a good thing, believe me), and I like what you did with the magic.
Searchingformyheart chapter 25 . 10/12/2012
Aww...keep going! The story's got me hooked, and I really want to know what the dragon was talking about :O
Searchingformyheart chapter 15 . 10/12/2012
LOL I loved this chapter. Especially the part where Felt and Thea were arguing.. xD Keep writing!
Shadowedzone chapter 25 . 10/12/2012
Awesome, as always. And you were on time finally! Hurray! Can't wait till next Friday.
Shadowedzone chapter 24 . 10/7/2012
Okay, I'll review(but you have to keep your promise!). Oh, and you don't have to respond to my reviews, but I might like it if you do.
Flabbergasted Flock chapter 23 . 10/3/2012
This chapter's AN ruins the dramatic effect :P

["I told you my temper was short, princess," she growled, and opened her mouth wide.]

In dialogues like these, where the speaker doesn't speak anymore after the dialogue (or at least in the same paragraph) end the dialogue sentences with a '.' full stop instead of a comma

{"I told you my temper was short, princess." she growled, and opened her mouth wide.}
Shadowedzone chapter 23 . 10/1/2012
Well, I think it's awesome. That's all I'm thinking. Well, I'm also thinking about how to write what I'm thinking about, but that's besides the point. Keep up the good work!
Shadowedzone chapter 22 . 9/22/2012
Thanks for the chapter.

It was as awesome as a BBQ-ed spider!
Shadowedzone chapter 21 . 9/14/2012
I'll stay. And I think it's great, the only problem I have is the waiting, but it's definitely worth it.
Reader chapter 20 . 9/13/2012
Keep writing, I want to see the ending. This is an awesome story, though how can a person's eyes look like a feather? I think that it sounds like a story for little kids, but it is still a good story.
Shadowedzone chapter 20 . 9/12/2012
Your book is sweet, and I'll review any other books you make(If I like them).
Calliope chapter 20 . 9/7/2012
You know, during that fight, I had no idea who o root for, because I can't decide if I like Felt or Argon's a tough decision. Anyway, your chapter was great! Time to wait a week.
Calliope chapter 19 . 9/1/2012
I enjoy reading your story, and just like you, I find the Mayo intriguing and extremely creepy. Can't wait to see where it goes next week!
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