Reviews for Helpless
Eleantris chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
I loved this! So dark and spooky, with excellent vocab. Great work! :D

Eleantris. :)
AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Love this one! Great description and vivid imagery :D
Ivy Climbroe chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I love how you write! You think of the simplest things and put them into words, like a real nightmare. Great piece :)

-Ivy
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Again reminds me of Hunger Games (doesn't help that I finished reading the last book last night) but I just couldn't help imagining Katniss trapped in that room while they tried her for shooting Coin. Loved the imagery, very vivid! Great pace and before I could catch up with it, the end was nigh! Love, love, loved it! :-D
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Wow, that was intense. *sigh* Why are you so amazing? I always look for something that might need fixing, but I never do. And it's always so beautiful in my head.
Loved it.
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Beautiful imagery, as always my friend. Very dramatic and really gets the mind in a spin. You've captured the situation of a nightmare really well. Epic! :)
Valenteen chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Brilliant as ever- your writing is amazing. This truly personifies the night- I love it.