Reviews for Midnight Moon
Max Sorrell chapter 16 . 6/19/2013
Aww, how sweet. I'm glad Daniel finally decided to trust Emory by the end of this. I liked how you also compared them to when the two first met. They have gone a long way. :)
Max Sorrell chapter 15 . 6/17/2013
Great chapter. Wondering what the weakness is. :P
Max Sorrell chapter 14 . 6/16/2013
I really like Danel's sisters. I liked how you made them wise, but also gave them a sibling rivalry.
Max Sorrell chapter 12 . 6/16/2013
Hmm I really wonder how Michael was healing himself.
Max Sorrell chapter 11 . 6/16/2013
Michael's a creep D:
Max Sorrell chapter 9 . 6/16/2013
lol so we finally meet the infamous Michael. :P
I enjoyed the conversation with Aaron and Daniel at the start. the ass hole line made me laugh XD
Max Sorrell chapter 8 . 6/16/2013
I'm not sure if I like Aaron much. I mean you had a feeling from the start that he was sort of controlling, but he has really got to loosen up. Then again isn't he just worried about Emory's safety? Must read more. XD
Max Sorrell chapter 6 . 6/16/2013
I was sort of disappointed with how easily the group got captured. They should have known that was a bad idea. :/
Max Sorrell chapter 5 . 6/16/2013
Talk about a cliff hanger. XD
Man, I am really loving this. :D
Max Sorrell chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
Despite its limitations Emory's midnight moon powers sound really neat! :D
Max Sorrell chapter 3 . 6/16/2013
Wow, just wow. XD
Max Sorrell chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
Love this story so far! :D
Max Sorrell chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
A boy and a girl, together in a cave... I must say, I don't think I've read much (if anything) like it. I was happy at first that she saved him, but once the guy tied her up, I'm beginning to wonder what type of person he is.
H. Meadows chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Im in the process of rereading since you updated. I loved the original and im loving the remake justas much! I wish youd have kept Ems named spelled Emeary becauee it just seemed to fi her really well. But thats just minor stuff.

Your writing has improved tenfold. im seriously impressd.

Oh and i might have accidentally done some fanart. :D
MagicWords chapter 24 . 5/9/2013
I love everyone's involvement in this final chapter! Aaron and Daniel have the best bromance and Em and Daniel are so sweet. What he says to her just melted my heart. She did do a lot for him, and I am so glad that he finally came around and acknowledged everything. I also like the stumbling colt comparison. It's so cute! :D

And alas, it ends again. I still think you should write a sequel. I see so much potential for action. Wouldn't it be cool if a new danger came to Elodea and wrecked havoc across the land. With their new positions, they would have to fight. And what if Em got her powers back somehow, or got new ones? What if Aaron got some power? What if Virtus had a back-up plan?

The possibilities...but I understand if you want to make this a stand-alone story. It is a great story, though. A real treasure. I am so glad that a year after reading it the first time that I can go back and reexperience all the old feelings that sort of launched our FP careers :D

And I still think you should try publishing. Just a suggestion :D
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