I loved their quirky lines.

hey, just found you today and i absolutely love your stories! they're so intense and gah just sooo good. can't wait for the next one. you're a brilliant writer!

That was adorable! I always love the names you choose for your characters. Great job!

Epic :)

Amazing description, you can really paint the picture of what's going on, and I LOVE that. You have such talent, thanks for the new story! :)

oh my, i liked this a lot. your dialogue is quick, precise, and spot-on; i loved the end, when they are interrupting each other until james finally admits to himself and to her that he's in love. this was, to quote crazy stupid love, "the perfect combination of sexy and cute." hahah seriously, keep writing!

Hello summer holidays indeed! This was great - hope there's more stories to come!

great one shot it was sweet loved it

Ah, this is so sweet. It's simply written but the feeling is there.

Thank you for sharing this.)