Reviews for Make Me a Deal
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
How amazing! This poem certainly has an outstanding unique touch to it, that really catches attention. Amazing job, keep it up :D
Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
the begining of this is sooooo firmilure! haha i was sooo there! i was mean and retchid and horriable and glared with evil intent into his sad broken stare ( ... haha ryhme) and now that its all past its so hard to go back to being civil. its like trying to tame a beast you unleashed to survive. and your poem remindes me of all this, it has a very real raw quality to it that i like
Ditzygirly22 chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
The begining part is so sad, but atleast it all ends happy.
As always, you are an amazing writer!