Reviews for Minnows
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Interesting piece. The ending was definitely good. I liked that last line, it was unexpected. I also liked the "cacophonous clash of colors—"... that was great alliteration and I liked the combination of the sight and sound terms. Nice job!

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Legkicker chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
I can't say I fully understood this poetry, but all that means is you have a deeper mindset than I do...

From what I get from this story, is that the women feels trapped. She tries to break free, but life just resets again anyway. It's like an endless cycle.

I don't know, I could be way off base here but poetry is in the eyes of the writer, and different in the eyes of the reader. Sometimes anyway...

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