Reviews for Sky Gems
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I love the images of swimming and water that you use in the first line, so different and so effective in describing the sky. I love the image of mimosa blossoms too because it added to the peaceful vibe of the poem. Great job :)

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Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Very beautiful. This haiku has a special touch to it. Great job, keep it up :D