Reviews for Hands
Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This is somthing obviously very emotional to the writer, and it's left up to the reader to draw you in, either way your left going wow that was strong! emotional! but if you connect, if you can relate, then it's even stronger, those emotions, that regret, of what was i doing? why can't i stop? I can't keep on! The hand's are the trator's, no, the mind, no the eyes, no every thing about me! i mean if you make a connection, your left wanting to say, that was 6 years ago by your date, and i hope your better now. and i hope you never stopped writing if it gave you that much power and that much cleansing of your soul.
AdorableMe chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Wow, this was...deep. I'm not sure if I'm right, but this is supposed to be a poem of someone hurting themself ad regreting it, right? I like your vocabulary in this, it's very wide. I think that the poem really raises the awarness of self harm, and you did a great job of showing that in rhis piece of writing. Sunny