Reviews for Power Untamed
Kara P chapter 22 . 1/28/2013
Yay! I'm so glad you updated and I can't wait to learn more about everyone. :)
Melanie Scott chapter 22 . 1/13/2013
finally a new chapter! It may be short but it was a great chapter none the less! So happy to see you back and posting! Hope your exams went well and shame about the wisdom teeth. They are no fun at all! Look forward to a new update and very curious out this side project! Will we get to see it?
Love-it-away chapter 22 . 1/13/2013
Hey girl! :D

Oh my god! You finally updated! I'm so happy! Mostly because this is an amazing story, and I'm glad you didn't give up on it after all. :) I loved her talk with Logan, I still ship her most with Logan. Sorry not sorry. :p Truly hope you'll write more soon!
Rock on, babe!
Xx Shirley
Kara P chapter 21 . 10/9/2012
I'm loving this story more and more.
The addition of the squirrel is to cute!
I can't wait for the next chapter. x3
Love-it-away chapter 21 . 10/5/2012
Hey girl! :D

Sorry I missed that you uploaded a new chapter. :O It's just; Both my twitter timeline and my email inbox are a permanent disaster area, and my typing monkees are threatening to strike. :p Anyway, I loved this chapter. :) It's good to see some bonding between Christian and Jocelyn. Also, it is nive to see some the more emotional side, and I did enjoy it. 3 Hope to read more soon. :)

xxx Shirley
Aaisha chapter 21 . 10/3/2012
Omg! I didn't even know that you posted this chapter! And you gave me a shoutout :D thanks, you're amazing! ,, I enjoyed this chapter a lot, there was a lot of emotions and I think that was great because I understand the characters more, and I like Christian too! He and Jocelyn can relate because they both lost their families, so now I ship them too xD I like Logan and Christian! Wow this is confusing! They're both just so perfect!
Melanie Scott chapter 21 . 9/27/2012
Wow. This chapter was amazing / devastating. Christian seems so in control all the time, it hurts me personally to know that he grieves so much. Same for Jocelyn. I kind of like how she chose to not magically help him but to just talk it out. She's a beautiful character - your an amazing writer
Vampiress21 chapter 21 . 9/27/2012
Stop making me cry! Your story is breaking my heart for so many reasons, I love it
Aaisha chapter 20 . 9/24/2012
Hahahaha that was absolutely hilarious! A mexican squirall! I think mexican people aslo speak spanish right? And Frankie totally sounds mexican! He is adorable, I'm loving the new addition :D
Also I like Gabriel in this chapter, I feel bad that he doesn't have anyone and only just a little bit want him to be with Jocelyn, but more than that I really want her to be Logan! It was so cool when she healed Frankie! The story is fantastic! I'm team Logan all the wayyyyy! Can't wait for the next chapter ,, please tweet to notify us about your next chapter ,I'll be stalking your tweets ;D xx
Aaisha chapter 19 . 9/24/2012
Woah! That was so emotional! My gosh :'( ,, I never like Christian that much at first, I liked Logan better, Aaaah but now I just feel so bad for Christian! He has to hold his little sister while she died in his arms! :( that is too sad! who was it that stabbed her though? Was it Christians father? Did Logan mean to kill Christians parents or was he in an anger and was unable to control himself? Were Logan and Christian close friends? And is Christian immortal as well and knew Logan from when he was human? These are just a bunch of questions I'm not sure about but I cant wait to read further and learn more about hunters ,,I'm begining ro adore the characters more and more as I read :p, your story is fantastic! I'm a huge fan! :D xx
Aaisha chapter 18 . 9/24/2012
Definitely Team Logan foreverrrr! Hahah xD it was so adorable when he called her,“My Jocelyn” ,,how sweet! And it is so funny how they are all swooning over her :p ,, but I hope she will be with Logan :D ,, I'm still looking forward to reading about Logan and Chritians history together and how Logan and Cassandra became vampires ,, I also feel really sad that she lost all her family and this is for the second chapter: I wish you had explained her feelings towards the loss of her little brother and father because surely it is a great and painful loss and I think it would have been more emotional and I find it more interesting to read about emotions and maybe we as readers would feel remorseful over the loss of her little brother and father and that would make it more meaningful you know? Well that's just my opinion ,, you're a brilliant, amazing and fantastic writer! And I hope your book gets published it would have a lot of fans :D xx
Aaisha chapter 17 . 9/24/2012
Hahaha its so funny how they all want her! XDbut I ship Jogan hahah :p xx
Aaisha chapter 16 . 9/24/2012
Gosh! That what so awesome how she made the roses grow! Amazing :D xx
Aaisha chapter 15 . 9/24/2012
I ship Logan and Jocelyn! Hahah xD it was so adorable when he wiped her tear away! I didn't know that I would become such a fan when I followed you on twitter and decided to read your story :p I'm XxAaisha by the way :D xx
Aaisha chapter 14 . 9/24/2012
“Don't piss me off” is that something they said in the old days? Hahah I really like Cassandras character ,, she Is so hardcore! :D xx
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