Reviews for Butterfly
Alaeryel chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
OH HOW I WILL BE WAITING FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER! You already have the angst going and INTRIGUE! So many questions plaguing my mind and in wont of answers! Whyd did Kora do it? Did Xavier put her up to it? Why her mom is such a BITCH? You have done a very good job at delivering this story in a well written way!
ScarletRose7865 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I love it! No really, I do. Teenage pregnancy is horrible, and I fullheartedly believe it can be 100% preventable, but too many people judge pregnant teenagers. They don't think about their feelings, or what their circumstances are, and this really gives us a good look. It delves into the personal thoughts of a pregnant teen, and helps us understand her feelings. I'm excited to see how this develops, and I want to get deeper inside her head, to find out all the details. Good work!

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