Reviews for All That Once Was
earthday chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
This is really great! I loved the rhythm of it and how you portrayed Mary's hope at her escape plan which was soon dashed. The last lines were absolutely wonderful, about Rome and all that once was. It finished the poem perfectly. Really good! :)
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
That's the first haiku narrative I've ever read. Nicely done!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
This is a very creative use of haiku to tell a story.
Highly readable and entertaining. You certainly made
me feel Mary's anguish.
Margaret Casady chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
This a complex and simple haiku that i have ever read. the image of Queen Mary and Sir Humphrey are engaging and spot on. Keep up the good work!