Reviews for Holy the Desert
D. Cowman chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
You've captured this struggle in a dirty polaroid that says too many things in too small a space. The grasping of redemption (a fanciful illusion) and the hunger for flesh. The fear and the visceral realization of the sadness that we will always be subjected to. I love this.

"and my mouth full of my tongue and of flesh/heaves and apology and a plea"