Reviews for Eyes Crimson Like The Blood They Drink
Tangerine chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Freaking AMAZING. I was totally captivated by this, you've such a talent with writing...
Nanumi chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
The opening gripped me, it was very readable and deliciously tense. The waking-up-in-captivity scenes don't usually appeal to me, but you've managed to get enough literary hooks in that it really works well. As for the gradual realisation that she's not human, I think the "She didn't allow it to intimidate her; she literally feel her superiority to this human… Wait… Human? Why did she just refer to him as a human, as though she wasn't one?" bit is overkill; instead, you could use the word "person" and skip the internal dialogue? It sort of gave the rest of the chapter away, especially with the sultry voice and such. The vampire aspect is really cliché, but you've written the first chapter well, and I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.