Reviews for Girl
qubed chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
You have an instinct for only presenting the most elegant details (and sometimes the most appropriately harsh). I like the confusion you indicate between the two girls. "I don't know what I want." The domineering used to unleash feelings.
The strange show of (correct me if I'm wrong) territory, with the shoulder biting/marks.

This piece has such a strange, intense tone. Bravo, lady.