Reviews for The Sound Of Rain
Fhdftfddty KG chapter 8 . 9/26/2012
"you're never in the friend zone permanently" i concur and i think you may have made a mistake in this chapter, though I'm not entirely sure if you did. But what i think is going to happen is August and Kryslyn are going to hang out Friday night and something is going to end up happening between them. I'm not gonna say what i think entirely because i happen to spoil stories from time to time without meaning to as you were probably told by Sam but anyway i can't wait til the next update
Fhdftfddty KG chapter 7 . 9/26/2012
Hey sorry i haven't reviewed until now but i really like the story so far this chapter was exciting for me because 1. I didn't expect Cat to break up with August and 2. I never expected August to ever like Krys, I can't wait to read the next chapter
GlitterAttack chapter 8 . 9/19/2012
Haha, I like how Krys randomly says "Hey gorgeous." That was pretty funny and unexpected, lol. :)
I would like to see more on how she found out/admitted/came to the conclusion that she was gay. It would be nice to see how it all happened.
Update soon please! Loved the chapter! 3
ElettraBelle chapter 8 . 9/17/2012
Awww I'm beginning to like ginger. August is really nice. Like really! And it's also really sad to know that she broke up with Cat. :/ Oh well. I like your quote. "Don't give up hope. Espicially before the friendship is established." Very very very nice. :)
XxSaMMiExX06 chapter 8 . 9/16/2012
Even though my life is nowhere near Krys' life. This chapter taught me something. We don't give up hope because people don't deny us. Maybe that's why we get hurt. People string us along like that. Honestly, I thought this was a great chapter! You're showing life lessons and opening people's eyes in a way. I see Krys and August are gonna be pretty good friends ] once again, great job D
XxSaMMiExX06 chapter 7 . 9/16/2012
August seems to be chilling out.. Good. Poor her though. A break up like that can't be easy. I hope she gets better. Cat seems like a very smart cookie though O Great job, Rach. D and you can make promises on my behalf.. If I can keep them P
XxSaMMiExX06 chapter 6 . 8/27/2012
xD this chapter honestly had me laughing at some parts. Krys is way in denial. She was harsh though -.- When August said, "Are you full-out gay, or just bisexual? Or are you just a whore and will take whatever is offered?" That had me laughing! P it reminded me of the whore. P Dude, everyone's always talking about a gay-dar! And I'm just sitting there like O_o I apparently have no gay-dar what so ever. P Great chapter, best friend! Proud of you P
ElettraBelle chapter 6 . 8/26/2012
"gay-dar" ihihi. Rach, I have no idea why would you want us to like a girl as mean as August?! If you're trying, then you're doing a bad work. I. Hate. Her. And good for Krys, standing up for herself infront of the 'mean-factory'. But I still like Cat. There's something that pulls me towards her, I don't know what. I really wanna know what's going to happen next! This is the first time in this story that I feel sooo excited about!
GlitterAttack chapter 6 . 8/25/2012
Wow... August is mean! I know you want us to like her and all, but I really don't. I mean, she can't just go asking people if they are gay! I would be offended, honestly, because that is just a personal question (even if I'm not gay.) :D
Nevertheless, I really liked the chapter! You had a lot of action and drama in here, which I like! Update soon please! 3
ElettraBelle chapter 5 . 8/9/2012
At first I thought Kryslyn was gay. But then it turns out August is! O_o Didn't see that coming actually. Cat is so so so sweet! I like her. :) She's sweet, unlike August. (I'm really hating this ginger.)
alittlewhitehouse chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
Haha, redheaded cat reminds me of Cat from Victorious which is irrelevant to the subject. Any ways.. Kryslyn sounds like a character that I suppose a lot of girls can relate t. Wonderful story so far :)
XxSaMMiExX06 chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
I don't like August. -.- Kryslyn is starting to seem more appealing as a person. Honestly. :) I love Catrina. I imagined her in my head. She seems beautiful. August seems pretty but like a person that urgggg.! :P The fact that August has a girlfriend isn't surprising. :P it just didn't surprise me. :P
GlitterAttack chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
Cat seems nice so far, and I do like her. :)
I was kind of surprised that August is gay, but I think it's a nice idea. It's definitely going to have a huge impact on the story.
Can't wait to see where you take this, because I have honestly no idea what will happen next.
Great chapter, update soon! 3
TheeBookWriter chapter 5 . 8/8/2012
I don't like Cat much, she could have more to her where she is a better person but she's not coming across as kind to me. August should TOTALLY have a girlfriend it'll be cute! :) This is another perfect chapter I'm reading the After Effects Long Term story still :) I'll be done in a bit! Yes, you, young Sarah Dessen, you! :D You are just a perfect writer!
TheeBookWriter chapter 4 . 8/5/2012
Wow! You write such amazing stories it's unbelievable! I would describe you as a young Sarah Dessen herself which is a compliment because to me shes amazing! I love the way you write like it's happening at this very moment and its captivating the way you write, it captures the reader in a matter of lines and you can't let go! It's a story of twists and surprises and it deserve so much attention in FictionPress as a brilliant story! You're great, just great! I want more and I can't wait for more!
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