Reviews for Passion and Nature
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I love that last line, I think that's really great. Emotions can be quite like the earth. Great poem.
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Amazing! I love the flow and power of this poem. Original, really. Keep it up :D
FixitfelixJRJRJR chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Repetition is a powerful tool, don't overuse it. Also, this line "Burning strike" doesn't flow with the rest of the poem. Good title though.