Reviews for Eden Guard
BrotherDan chapter 14 . 2/18/2014
That scene at the end of Ch.14 was tense. This story is still the dopest. I like how you always find a way to situate the characters into unfavorable scenarios, it really keeps the story interesting.

In particular, the scenes with Alice are great. The scene where Alice couldn't risk killing Glowe, so she has Zenith force his leave was great. I also like that she forced Zenith to spy on FLIGHT, his own group. Her character is pragmatic to the point of being anti-heroic, and sometimes she's just mean. You really get the sense that she's a scientist that you don't want to mess with.

Would like to see more Elliot though. He is way cool.

Update soon please.
Sunie chapter 14 . 12/13/2013
oh my god you updated O:
chibipoint5 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
The intro sounds like Chrome Shelled Regios fan fic
kingofe3 chapter 12 . 2/10/2013
Nice to see more of Reina's thoughts as well others.
kingofe3 chapter 11 . 2/10/2013
Finally you updated the story! Thank you!

This chapter didn't have much, but the inclusion of a new character can always lend to more interesting development (and enemies). I'll get to the next chapter right away.
r3dacted chapter 11 . 2/9/2013
Naw, just fooling around. But it is cool to finally see the next part of this story.
Kisho chapter 13 . 2/9/2013
Kyaaaa, this is so coooll, nya ;w; I cannot tell you how happy I am to see you back and writing again, nya TwT
Maybe I'm just crazy but the prose feels so much cleaner and smoother, the characters so much more clear-cut and defined, nya, I looove iiiittt ;v;
The plot is getting deep, too, but it's still so... so... easy to read, nya! That's amazingg TuT
And jeez, Sephi-chan, talk about a cliffhanger xDD Uuuu, I really can't wait to see more, nya, I hate to say this after such an amazing and long-awaited triple update, but... moooreee xDD (/hit)
Jax Creation chapter 10 . 10/21/2012
Eeeeeeh!? You're ending it there!? Noooooo (TT_TT) But it's right in the middle of the fight! *bangs head against desk*

Also, Break command awesome.

Great job Sephi-chan.


*(Typo): As a result, it flew and [thrashed] about faster than the other one had.
Jax Creation chapter 9 . 10/21/2012
Uwaaah ! Elliot is so cool :3 He just promoted from the list of characters I want to punch in the face to being the dark, awesome, brooding guy XD

I felt that the Contaminoid could have lasted a little longer considering how "indestructible" you made them out to be n the last chapter, but meh.

Good work :3
Jax Creation chapter 8 . 10/21/2012
Oops... Completely forgot about the contaminoids XD
Well... Anyway. FIGHT! Yay!
*clicks next*
Jax Creation chapter 7 . 10/21/2012
Poor, poor, Reina... (TT_TT) Sephi-chan don't make this too sad!
Jax Creation chapter 6 . 10/21/2012
Hmm... So the reality is, no Eden, then no survival outside of Eden. It has a pivotal role in this world... That's kind of sad...

Good chapter, nice character development.

*[Elliot alone is enough to deal with the formalities."] - Odd sentence structure here. I get what you mean but I think it's been worded incorrectly. Sounds more like Elliot is Alice's butler XD
Jax Creation chapter 5 . 10/20/2012
Aaaaaaaaaahh, Zenith you did the right thing lying to Reina (TT_TT) Must have killed him, but he was right, Reina would have probably done something stupid if she knew the truth...

And dammit why is Eve so adorable? She's like Chi from Cho it's, but a little more empty—probably more like Rei Ayanami from NGE. I know that the Resistance is out to get her though... Aaah, I don't anything to happen to her!
Jax Creation chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
(TT_TT) Was really able to visualise the scene with Zenith and Rei in my head with the melancholy music and everything...

This is really fantastic...

But so sad... Uwaaaah...
Jax Creation chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
Dun dun dun! Is he going to meet people he once knew? Aaaaah, poor Zenith, he's just being shoved right into the thick of things...

Alice is really very cold, isn't she? :/

And... Foreshadowing? Is he going to try and help Serith remember her past? Severe implications there...

Wooooo next chapter! Fight scene, yay! :3
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