Reviews for Sea and the new detective
AoideMythos chapter 12 . 8/31/2012
New York? That's gonna be interesting! XD
AoideMythos chapter 11 . 8/31/2012
Pete, some advice to you. GET OVER IT!
seriously, no one needs to be mean to innocent people!
AoideMythos chapter 10 . 8/31/2012
Ah! the story's gonna end soon!
AoideMythos chapter 9 . 8/31/2012
Mrs. Cornish sounds so nice! too bad she doesn't know Pete is no good!
AoideMythos chapter 8 . 8/31/2012
Is it possible to say they'll kill him in front of a detective and officer and not get arrested?
Lucy could've gotten really hurt!
Pete, that meanie! errrr...
AoideMythos chapter 7 . 8/31/2012
broke skin? OW... that must really hurt! Good chapter though!
AoideMythos chapter 6 . 8/31/2012
I'm surprised Dawn kept a picture of Pete...
AoideMythos chapter 5 . 8/31/2012
They should've checked the cupboard! next chappie away!
AoideMythos chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
Oh man, the suspense!
AoideMythos chapter 3 . 8/31/2012
Pete is such a meanie! errr... And $500 000?! Wow, Pete is cruel!
AoideMythos chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
I think Tabitha draws much better than me! I wish I was a detective! I'm soooo jealous!
AoideMythos chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Oh my goodness, an eight story series?! I can't wait after reading this!
HSH chapter 11 . 8/11/2012
Yeah I have some issues here. Firstly, why didn't Pete just kill them when he had the chance instead of doing the ransom nonsense? Secondly who disarmed him? And lastly can't they just cut the head cuffs off her, I don't see the big deal here?
HSH chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Why'd they fall asleep? Did he rufy them? Otherwise wouldn't they be too scared to fall asleep?
Akazai Kisaragi chapter 12 . 8/3/2012
Aw... That's it? Welcome to the club sounds interesting btw...;)
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