Reviews for pretty little psychopath
blank-unused chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
You could have described the scene more :/
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
That one line of dialogue-just awesome. Perfect vulgarity, and though it's literal, there's a hint of absurd to it.

The first paragraph was chunky, though. The first sentence had too many commas and the flow was generally a bit off.

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