|Reviews for The Spectre|
| Autumn-Freeze chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
The imagery is extremely good! I could see and smell the temple!
I would have liked to know why the scholar was there in the first place. A bit more backround would have been nice or is the 'back-story' coming later?
Derek and Frederick conversations, the early ones anyway, seem a bit forced. The later ones are better I thought.
Fredericks insistence on armed men is good! He is a soldier of fortune and knows how important firepower is when facing a sure danger!
| Oba chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
very good...i hope to see more :D