Reviews for Travel Neccessities
The Autumn Queen chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Interesting poem. I like the shortness; it works well with the title. "Necessities" implies short bare fact, and you've given that, and still made it visually appealing.

I also like the sharpness of the poem. The comma after you is very effective - it's almost as if there's a finger being pointed there. Nice and sharp, and the dashes that end each line save the last works well too...especially since the last line actually doesn't have one, tapering the end off. Almost like drawing a map and rolling it up neatly. Good idea; very clever.

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