Reviews for Conflict
Kam I Am chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
A beautiful piece. In a stretch of less than 100 words you manage to capture the complexities of relationships and the sad fact that, more often than not, they’re not meant to last. It’s a poem written for people who have gone through that tribulation before, but the prose is strong enough to convey the emotion to those who haven’t yet had the chance.

Great stuff.
The Keyboard Poet chapter 1 . 12/29/2018
What a sad poem
Ckh chapter 1 . 6/16/2018
Okay. This is good. Its raw, I think, the disappointment that the poem evokes. I haven't dabbled in romance myself but I can see how many can relate to this poem. A poem well done.
The Voice Of Silence chapter 1 . 2/2/2018
Ah, I see what this is about. Fortunately, I have never had this problem, but I sympathize. Normally, I give a little constructive criticism here, but I don't know prose poetry well enough to do that. Since I can't write it, I am unqualified to give you advice. I actually find it hard to judge prose poetry, since it doesn't have to follow any sort of pattern or scale, but this one seems pretty good to me.
XXXDISCONTINUEDXXX chapter 1 . 2/2/2017
This is beautiful...
BradytheJust chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
Alright...this was hands down one of the best poems I've ever read on this site. No contest.
Plus I'm also going through a similar problem myself, and this poem is helping me heal. You wrote it beautifully and I really feel a personal connection with the work.
Wonderful job!
Starssence chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
I love this! Especially the last stanza... the idea of onlookers looking at a person who's heartbroken, but seeing nothing unusual, is both realistic and poetic! :)

(Figured out your name, by the way... or maybe just pen name? xD)
Geekforlife101 chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
Great poem! It truly captures the dread of unrequited love well in such a short but sweet way.