|Reviews for Conflict|
| Kam I Am chapter 1 . 10/20/2019
A beautiful piece. In a stretch of less than 100 words you manage to capture the complexities of relationships and the sad fact that, more often than not, they’re not meant to last. It’s a poem written for people who have gone through that tribulation before, but the prose is strong enough to convey the emotion to those who haven’t yet had the chance.
| The Keyboard Poet chapter 1 . 12/29/2018
What a sad poem
| Ckh chapter 1 . 6/16/2018
Okay. This is good. Its raw, I think, the disappointment that the poem evokes. I haven't dabbled in romance myself but I can see how many can relate to this poem. A poem well done.
| The Voice Of Silence chapter 1 . 2/2/2018
Ah, I see what this is about. Fortunately, I have never had this problem, but I sympathize. Normally, I give a little constructive criticism here, but I don't know prose poetry well enough to do that. Since I can't write it, I am unqualified to give you advice. I actually find it hard to judge prose poetry, since it doesn't have to follow any sort of pattern or scale, but this one seems pretty good to me.
| XXXDISCONTINUEDXXX chapter 1 . 2/2/2017
This is beautiful...
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
Alright...this was hands down one of the best poems I've ever read on this site. No contest.
Plus I'm also going through a similar problem myself, and this poem is helping me heal. You wrote it beautifully and I really feel a personal connection with the work.
| Starssence chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
I love this! Especially the last stanza... the idea of onlookers looking at a person who's heartbroken, but seeing nothing unusual, is both realistic and poetic! :)
(Figured out your name, by the way... or maybe just pen name? xD)
| Geekforlife101 chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
Great poem! It truly captures the dread of unrequited love well in such a short but sweet way.