|Reviews for My First Love, Because of You|
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 6/5/2016
Each stanza had an image that tied together and had an overall message. Good rhythm.
| sassyk100 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
well done, extremely well done. you really captured the depth and honesty felt in a first love, and the pain and sadness in a first heartbreak. this was so beautiful that it brought tears to my eyes. this really meant something to me. i think i might print it out and frame it, along with 'my words'. i really loved this. :)