Reviews for The Odyssey of Brotherhood
The Siege chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
ahahaha THIS: "We stopped at a fast-food restaurant, ordered, pissed, and ate hamburgers and fries." PISSED! THEY PISSED! AND YOU MENTIONED IT! HAHAHA IDK WHY BUT THAT STRUCK ME AS SO FREAKING HILARIOUS BAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH HAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHA
er anyways. this was good! mr. c was like suuuuuuuuuuuper creepy and like seriously nick how stupid can you get...no offense but you know what i mean right? and i also noticed that your girly-guys always have L names. liam, leon...well ok theres two. whatever. i just thought of a wimpy leon when i read that but turns out liam is pretty brave, hotwiring the car like that, lol
tis cool. please do continue. btw the third person isn't too much of a change because you're still talking about the other characters a lot but it's kinda nice because now i can tell what one of the guys is actually feeling and i guess it's more suspenseful this way because it's not omniscient. ok ima go finish my practice sat sooo laterrrrrr do we have a shift this week together? i'll check BYEEEEEE update soon bro ;)
Hariboooo chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I'm really looking forward to how your putting a great greek poem into your own modern version, and i'm liking it so far! please update soon :)
The Siege chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
OHHH MYYYY GOOOODNEEEEESSSSS IS THIS A REAL, HONEST-TO-GOODNESS, ACTUAL STORY? WITH CHAPTERS? OHHHHHHHHHEMMGEEEE
lawl. ;) well I really like it! I haven't read or watched The Odyssey (YET!) so I don't really know what's supposed to allude to what but uh it's cool and that's good enough for me bahaha update soooooooooooooooon i'm following OMG YOUR FIRST MULTICHAP STORY HEHEHEHE ME-ME-ME SO EXCITED ME SOOO EXCITED ME GONNA HAVE A BALL TODAY (hahaha Friday reference! it's been a while huh? almost forgot about it cept not really)
anyways yeah update soon! i wrote a lot of stuff today so i'm like kinda proud. lemme know what you think yeah?
laterz, bro :P